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June 25, 2023 By J.J. Hebert, USA & WSJ Bestselling Author

Common Beginner Author Mistakes and How to Sidestep Them

Embarking on the journey of writing a book can be an exhilarating and rewarding experience. However, as a novice wordsmith, you may find yourself stumbling into common pitfalls along the way. Fear not, budding author! In this article, we’ll explore some typical beginner author blunders and provide valuable tips to help you avoid these literary traps.

1. The Perfectionist’s Plight: Over-editing While Writing

As a fledgling author, it’s natural to want every word, sentence, and paragraph to be flawless. However, obsessing over perfection while writing can slow you down and stifle your creativity. Instead of getting bogged down in endless editing, focus on getting your ideas on paper (or screen) and let the words flow freely. Remember, there will be plenty of time for polishing during the editing phase.

2. Rambling Road: Losing Focus on Your Story

It’s easy to get carried away with subplots, minor characters, and elaborate descriptions, but losing focus on your main story can leave readers feeling lost and disconnected. To avoid this pitfall, always keep your central narrative and character arcs in mind, ensuring that every scene and chapter serves a purpose in driving your story forward.

3. Cookie-Cutter Characters: Neglecting Character Development

Compelling, well-rounded characters are the lifeblood of any great story. Don’t fall into the trap of creating one-dimensional, cookie-cutter characters that fail to engage readers. Take the time to develop your characters’ backgrounds, motivations, and quirks, and consider how they will grow and change throughout your story. Remember, flawed characters are often the most relatable and memorable.

4. Info Dump Dilemma: Overloading Readers with Backstory

While it’s important to provide context and backstory, bombarding readers with too much information can be overwhelming and detract from the overall narrative. Instead of dumping all your background details at once, reveal them gradually throughout your story, allowing readers to piece together your characters’ histories and the world they inhabit.

5. Pacing Pitfalls: Ignoring the Rhythm of Your Story

A well-paced story keeps readers engaged and eager to turn the page. However, neglecting pacing can result in a disjointed, dull, or confusing narrative. To maintain a steady rhythm, balance action, dialogue, and description, ensuring that each scene contributes to the overall flow of your story. Experiment with varying sentence lengths and structures to create an interesting and dynamic reading experience.

6. Sticking to Stereotypes: Relying on Overused Tropes

While it’s true that certain tropes and clichés are popular for a reason, relying too heavily on them can make your story feel stale and unoriginal. Instead of sticking to stereotypes, challenge yourself to put a fresh spin on familiar themes or explore new ideas that set your story apart from the pack.

7. Lonesome Writer Syndrome: Isolating Yourself from Feedback

Writing can be a solitary pursuit, but seeking feedback from others is crucial to honing your craft and improving your work. Don’t succumb to the temptation to keep your manuscript hidden away, safe from criticism. Share your work with beta readers, writing groups, or even friends and family who can provide valuable insights and constructive feedback.

8. The Comparison Trap: Measuring Your Success Against Others

As a beginner author, it’s easy to fall into the trap of comparing your work to that of established writers, leading to feelings of inadequacy and self-doubt. Remember, every author’s journey is unique, and comparing yourself to others is counterproductive. Focus on developing your own voice and style, and celebrate your progress and achievements along the way.

In Conclusion: Navigating the Literary Landscape with Confidence

By being aware of these common beginner author mistakes and taking steps to avoid them, you’ll be better equipped to navigate the literary landscape with confidence. Embrace the learning process, seek feedback, and stay true to your unique voice and vision. With time, patience, and perseverance, you’ll transform from a rookie wordsmith into a seasoned storyteller, ready to captivate readers with your compelling tales.

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